Going bowling in the heart of dallas.

[bstnsportsfan3]

Wrote my first ever sports article. Check it out. Ill take any honest feedback. Hope i gave the school some good press!

http://www.indallas.com/sports/going-bowling-in-the-heart-of-dallas/

[CMJ]

We had four straight NOB appearances, not three.

[bstnsportsfan3]

whoops....... duh ill see if i can get it changed.

EDIT....getting it changed. thanks.

Edited December 18, 2013 by bstnsportsfan3

[mdmeangreen]

Nice article!

[Grant.UNT]

led by Senior Wide Receiver Brelan Chancellor who lead the country. (should be "led" or "leads"

and the physical brand of offense lead the Mean Green (same error here)

Overall, great job! See you at the game.

Edited December 18, 2013 by Grant.UNT

[bstnsportsfan3]

led by Senior Wide Receiver Brelan Chancellor who lead the country. (should be "led" or "leads"

and the physical brand of offense lead the Mean Green (same error here)

Overall, great job! See you at the game.

Thanks Grant, ill have to blame my editor on those hahaha.

[Harry]

Nice Job!

[MeanGreenRoadrunner]

You forgot to mention how every Mean Green player stands 6'5, they can bench press Volkswagen/s, and run 40s between 4.20-4.30. Other than that - nice write-up!

[FirefightnRick]

I like it Tony, good job.

Rick

[Cerebus]

When describing me as a "charming, suave sophisticate" and "paragon of the manly aesthetic" you probably should have mentioned something about the fact that I always smell like an enchanting mix of sandalwood and fresh baked cookies.

Other than that, good article.

[Greenrex]

Good article! Thanks!